February 15, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story on ice. It can be an event on the ice, a game on ice or a drink on ice. Go where the prompt leads you.
Dreams on Ice
As the bourbon disappeared from the glass, the ice began to clink as Samuel rhythmically swayed his hand to the national anthem on tv. No one around here would know it, but Samuel was once on his way to Olympics himself.
Decades ago when he first started letting his drinking get out of control, he had one or five too many before a qualifying match. His actions on the ice that day ruined his hockey career forever. Now the best he can do is sit in his usual spot at the bar and watch other people achieve his dream. (99 words)
13 responses to “Flash Fiction: Dreams on Ice”
That’s a sad reality for some. Well done, most engaging.
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Thank you. I am not divorced but I am usually the one to shovel and I don’t enjoy it.
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Wow. I just realized that my comment was for my other story I wrote today. So here is my real response…I wanted to show the flawed side of humanity. Thank you for your comment.
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Thanks for stopping by….I wouldn’t enjoy shoveling snow either….
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A tragic take on ice, but a good introspection of a character’s flaws.
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Many times characters, much like real people, could have what they dream of but they let their vices keep them from their full potential.
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No miracles on this ice, just escape and drowning of sorrows. Nice tale…
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I tried to use it as a play on words that he put his dreams on ice when he chose the drink on ice.
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The most difficult words – It could have been…
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He could have had his dreams but he let his vices get in the way.
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Tragic and sad. Well told.
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Thank you
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