April 26, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a fish tale. It can be about fishing from any angel, about those who fish, or what might be caught. Go where the prompt leads.
Big Catch
My uncle always took the older kids on the boat to go deep sea fishing at the annual family reunion, and I was finally going.
My older brother was the first to feel a tug on his line and caught a baby shark. Everyone patted him on the back with pride. I finally felt a tug on the line of my Barbie fishing pole. I dramatically reeled in my big catch, so everyone would notice.
“What did I catch?” I yelled.
I looked down at the end of my fishing line to see a seashell stuck to my hook.
12 responses to “Flash Fiction – Big Catch”
Didn’t ya hate being a kid, knowing you’d done something memorably “cute” and not wanting to be remembered for it?
My first time surf casting I caught a rental Jeep. glad I had the drag set loose.
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As an adult it is fun to look back and laugh at it. As a kid, I was always competing with my brother and he got a shark and I got a shell? Now that felt so unfair. Yet, more people remember the shell than the shark.
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But it really is cute!
Can you imagine catching a baby shark on a Barbie pole?
No? I thought not! You’re welcome!! 😉 😀
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A baby shark would have snapped my pole in half but that would have been an awesome story.
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Am I hearing a Part 2? In your wildest imagination…
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It’s all good, you pulled a good story out of these memories.
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What Liz said.
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That’s still more than I ever caught!
Plus, shells are better. 🙂
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A shell is cuter than a knotty eel – my first catch!
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And I bet your brother still remembers! Shark week, kid-style, and Little Sister catches a shell.
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Well they don’t have shell week. Maybe they should.
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