January 21, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that rephrases “light at the end of the tunnel.” Think of how the cliche replacement communicates a hopeful ending and aligns with your character or story. Go where the prompt leads!
Leave The Lights On
We used to think there was nothing to be afraid of in the dark, but not since they appeared. So many killed before we knew what was actually happening. Now we keep the lights on at night.
Ollie and I always left the lights on of course, but we also had a battery powered lantern that hung above our bed. When the electricity went out that night, we could hear screams echoing through the neighborhood.
As the battery started to fade with a flicker of the light, I noticed the sun was beginning to rise. We would survive tonight.
5 responses to “Flash Fiction – Leave the Lights On”
Oooooh! Grabs the reader by the chest and pulls you in. Nice!
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Thank you
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Timing is everything!
This stands alone but could be a scene in a larger piece.
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Thank you very much for your kind words.
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